據(jù)英國(guó)《電訊報(bào)》4月21日?qǐng)?bào)道，英國(guó)大學(xué)學(xué)院招生服務(wù)中心(Ucas)負(fù)責(zé)人表示學(xué)生在個(gè)人陳述中所用的“陳詞濫調(diào)”會(huì)損害其未來(lái)的職業(yè)發(fā)展。
Ucas數(shù)據(jù)顯示，“從小我一直是……”(From a young age I have always been...)是去年申請(qǐng)者最常用的開(kāi)頭。70萬(wàn)學(xué)生中有超過(guò)1,779名學(xué)生在個(gè)人陳述中喜歡用“最感興趣的是”(interested in)或“被…所吸引”(fascinated by)結(jié)尾。
小編梳理了個(gè)人陳述中被人用爛的句子，各位準(zhǔn)備寫(xiě)申請(qǐng)的童鞋可要留心喲!
1. “自打記事起，我就……”(For as long as I can remember I have...)
2. “我申請(qǐng)這個(gè)課程是因?yàn)?hellip;…”(I am applying for this course because...)
3. “我一直對(duì)…感興趣”(I have always been interested in...)
4. “在我一生當(dāng)中，我一直很享受…”(Throughout my life, I have always enjoyed...)
5. “回顧我的教育經(jīng)歷，我……”(Reflecting on my educational experiences...)
6. “護(hù)理專(zhuān)業(yè)是一門(mén)十分具有挑戰(zhàn)性的……”(Nursing is a very challenging and demanding [career/profession/course)
7. “在學(xué)術(shù)上，我一直是……”(Academically, I have always been...)
8. “我一直想從事…職業(yè)”(I have always wanted to pursue a career in...)
9. “我一直對(duì)…充滿(mǎn)熱情”(I have always been passionate about...)
10. “教育是充滿(mǎn)力量的武器，你可以用它來(lái)改變世界。”(Education is the most powerful weapon which you can use to change the world.)
Ucas首席執(zhí)行官M(fèi)ary Curnock Cook表示，個(gè)人陳述一定要個(gè)人化。“學(xué)會(huì)介紹自己在求職面試中是一項(xiàng)很重要的技能，用那些陳詞濫調(diào)無(wú)法讓你的才能凸顯。”
