關于作文復習書和工具：
1.慎小嶷的《十天突破雅思寫作》
2.劉洪波的寫作真經(jīng)。
（第一個可以買，第二個，有錢的話隨意你任性）
第一本書，作文水平5分左右的還是乖乖地看吧，
我前期看的時候感覺好厲害的，但是由于里面很多的短語其實不一定記得住，但是基本的還是必須會，例如兒童的有一個：
effected by the sexual image portrayed in the film
我到了后期要寫的話就是
Are prone to the sexual or violent image portrayed in the film
有許多的短語，不能死記，基本到了后期我寫作文就沒用，因為寫上去的話，要是提分的話，空洞而不切合實際，
feel the sense of accomplishment
Develop the sense of financial management
單純地記住一個短語是不足以把一個段落寫出來的，一般一個段落是一個論點，然后論證過程，不夠。
例如來說一個電子科技產品的影響，以下是BBC隨身英語上的（我也給了網(wǎng)址）
He said that this over-reliance on digital devices "erodes family time and they're missing out on messages from body language and facial expressions from those around them".
第二本書，其實主要在于文章的結構，里面推薦的五段式。
第一段;引言，背景介紹，話題的引出
第二段：正方觀點一，論點，論據(jù)，結尾
第三段：正方觀點二，論點，論據(jù)，結尾
第四段：反方觀點一，論點，論據(jù)，最后一句都是強調雖然有負作用但是然并卵。
第五段：總結過程，正大于反，然后結尾
大概只在劍9的作文里面看過同樣的結構。雖然是基本的作文結構，沒有什么可以否認的，建議最好不要 完全這樣，我說的這樣是缺少靈活性，例如要是一直固定的邏輯聯(lián)系，那么后面就很難再發(fā)展了，里面總共有很多篇文章，里面的短語，有些論點我不太贊同，因為都是用主觀的事實來說明，比如我，什么什么的來說明，按照高考語文老師說的議論文的原則，最好是別這樣。用一些客觀的，大家都知道的比較好。
沒事看看，多從里邊學習短語，
Moderation(適當，這次到了后面基本我都會用的)
Vice versa
工具：
朗文英英詞典 ，
牛津搭配詞典，
有道詞典，（中文翻譯出英文，再拿朗文去對比，再看牛津搭配詞典）
神器：MDict (可以多個詞典一起，詳情請百度)
作文結構，整體思路部分。
1.整個結構的把握，可以參照雅思的例文。
2.由于很喜歡四段式，而且我一般都是中立觀點，所以四段式很適合我，這也是moderation
3.我最喜歡的是劍7（要么就是劍6）一篇關于運動員的薪水高其他領域
結構如下：
第一段寫運動員的薪水高的現(xiàn)象
第二段寫開頭寫其他領域的也對社會有貢獻度，然后第二段后半部分就開始反駁
第三段順應第二段后半部分寫為什么運動員這樣會這樣高，理由，結論
第四段總結，運動員還在相對合理的階段，但是例如演員就不合理了（有一點發(fā)散的意味）
相信做閱讀做多了完全是能感覺出來文章的思路的，下面是個人的一般總結
我的寫作一般規(guī)律：
第一段是關于話題的一般總結，一般是一長段，然后最后一句，規(guī)律一般都是敘述一個中規(guī)中矩的，與命題相關的觀點，然后由此引發(fā)后面問題的討論，可以。
It’s generally appreciated that advertising serves for information,and its chief use to consumers,is in providing reliable information to them so that they can make well-informed decisions;to manufacturer,is in boosting the sales of commodity in order to maximize profit.
However，there is a wild diversity of view on this issue.
一長段，關于孩子部分的
There is no doubt that children are vulnerable to be adversely affected by digital devices and they always embrace things without consideration of degrees.with the fact that children spend more time on television,video and computer games,parents start to worry about that they can’t do these leisure activities in moderation.there.....
關于懲罰的
It’s undeniable that law can never be enforce unless fear support it,however,punishment has never been correlated with the type of crime only,it also has concluded taking the circumstances and motivation into consideration,therefore,fixed punishment is far form multifaceted and reasonable.
第二段，一般是正方或者advantage
一般用的固定句式是
The idea that (表達一個比較具體的觀點) wins favor with those who think that....
關于旅游的風俗習慣是否該包容的
The idea that host country should welcome cultural difference wins favor with those who think that to stimulate the development of culture and economy ,adoption of positive attitude should start form the level of government or local authority.(接下來是個人怎么處理地方差異，)
關于經(jīng)濟全球化的句子(好處)
Obviously,international trade is growing at a startling pace,which transformed market into highly
Efficient,intensive competition business.the cheap labor may make Chinese clothing competitive
In America ,As a result,people can buy clothing at lower price without worrying about quality...
.
第三段，一般是反方觀點和disadvantage
一般開頭有幾種，
關于大學學習理論知識和有關于工作的知識（沒找到具體的文章了，大概寫的）
第一段大概是意思是purely want to Push out the horizon of their knowledge
However,the glasshouse of knowledge would never grow anything edible , it’s unquestionable ,therefore,that to prepare students well for their future life ,college should not deprive them of opportunity to learn practicable knowledge .......
關于改變和不改變的問題
第一段大概意思段落，不改變，可以避免不必要的風險
Those who relish and appreciate the diversity of world hold different views that if only look at their past and present ,they may lose their future of diversity .
最后的段落是總結。一般是好壞總結和個人觀點
個人觀點，一般我都是鼓勵用中立來說，即好的說一點，但是也要盡可能彌補缺陷帶來的壞處。
In conclusion ,i encourage moderation on this issue,(正方一點，但是又提及反方，然后完結)
好壞比較特別有用的詞語 compensate
Personally,i think The benefit it brings to us more than compensate for disadvantages associated with it (提及好處的影響，倡導應該采取措施 ，此處各種adopt彌補缺陷)
關于單詞部分
有一點不必過多的拘泥于復雜，高級詞匯。簡單易懂但是描述精確有力
筆記本可以分出幾頁專門記下一類詞語，分別注明搭配，用法，雅思作文方向，
例句幾個詞語，順序為動詞，名詞(名詞短語)，形容詞，副詞。
動詞
Adopt( an approach/ policy/ attitude)
Implement (a policy)
Tackle (problem)
Compensate (advantage could more than compensate disadvantage associated with it )
Exploit(見名詞類)
名詞（一類話題必然有特別的詞語，需要專門學習)
Stereotype ( gender stereotype,另外exploited sex,domain基本就可以用于女性的話題)
Water-related illness
sanitation
形容詞（描述性質上可以準確，最好是多樣，一般兩個來形容最好）
Preventable ,(preventable water-related illness)
Effective,efficient (比較簡單，但是要熟練運用)
Vivid( in face of vivid and often media coverage ,child may had formed their idea,,,,,, )
副詞（形容動作也可以兩個，也可以用于形容詞，更加精確）
Effectively,efficiently(也是比較簡單類的，但是要熟練運用)
Overwhelmingly (simple but overwhelmingly strong)
例句：
In face of lack of proper sanitation,many people are suffering from Water-related illness.
Positive policy about public health system should be adopted to tackle this problem,effectively and efficiently ,such as......
It’s really easy to find Gender stereotype in daily life ,that a strenuous job is automatically regarded as men’ s domain
注意事項：
1.翻詞典必須看英語的，區(qū)分細微的差別，important,vital 都是重要 但是程度不一樣
2.多的表達的時候專門記下詞典給的例句，學習比較地道的搭配
3.動詞，形容詞，名詞轉換，dominate ,dominant ,dominance
句子積累和素材
句子的結構 ，一是復雜句子的結構，多看多學習，例文第一段：
It’s generally appreciated that advertising serves for information,and its chief use to consumers,is in providing reliable information to them so that they can make well-informed decisions;to manufacturer,is in boosting the sales of commodity in order to maximize profit.it’s not surprising,therefore, that advertising generally encourage consumers to buy product or service in quantity.
參照的句式有三個
開頭
It’s generally appreciated that............
中間一大段參考的培根的談讀書，我把原文貼出來
Studies serve for delight, for ornament, and for ability. Their chief use for delight, is in privateness and retiring; for ornament, is in discourse; and for ability, is in the judgment and disposition of business.
看了原文發(fā)現(xiàn)我有些細節(jié)沒對，可以學習一下
末尾一個前后帶因果順承
It’s not surprising ,therefore,that .....
一般大家的喜歡都是therefore 放前面的，句式的變化
再來一個句式，也會在素材觀點上見到他，專門寫國際援助的
The test of our progress is not whether we add more to the abundance of those who have much; it is whether we provide enough for those who have too little
句子結構方面，在清楚基本語法結構的前提下多讀讀英語的短片原文，特別學習下分號的作用。拿一個我模仿的（不是雅思作文的），忘記原文是哪篇文章了。排比句句式。
There were several burning and unforgettable moments between us,moments in which we were lying on the same bed ,but strangely ,before i fall asleep there was no sign of fantasy about doing it ;moments in which i told her “more than half ,you know i appreciate and have a crush on you ”,when after drinking,she asked me whether the statue i updated on my social networking website has something to do with her and how deep i feel about her;moments in which i realize her significance to me that life could be a little bit harder for me without others ,but life can always better with her .
素材的積累，大概就是往論點論據(jù)方面靠
一是可以參考國外的名人名言，請百度，資源應該多，
例如談“公平”的話題
all live under the same sky, but we don't all have the same horizon
It the spirit of equality means anything ,it must be opportunity
例如談廣告的負面作用
Advertising has put an end to the power of the most powerful adjectives.
順便把這種的運用來說一下，拿這個為例
Advertising has put an end to the power of the most powerful order to boost the sales of product ,advertising encourage people to associate advertised product with attractive life,using vastly overrated adjectives and providing misleading information vastly overrated 是我剛剛查朗文查overrate 剛剛學到的，例句是 a vastly overrated film中間是小凝的十天中的句式，在里面標注的是基本屬于難度比較高的句式，二是多讀一點相關的文章，比如青年老人話題Young men, in the conduct and management of actions, embrace more than they can hold; stir more than quiet, fly to the end, without consideration of the means and degrees;For the experience of age, in things that fall within the compass of it, directs them; but in new things, abuses them.
這種文章難度有點高，話說老年人富有經(jīng)驗，sophisticated
看BBC隨身英語的文章比較好，簡單粗暴，還標注了需要學習的短語。
復習方法總結
1.兩個本子，一個拿來隨時記，比如做完閱讀之后精讀的時候發(fā)現(xiàn)的句式和短語（相對比較隨意），一個是練習用的本子，這個本子最好是大的本子，一個話題分四頁，一頁是相關題目練習的作文，一頁是留來修改用，剩余兩頁是補充相關素材，句式結構，段落更改（第一本子的作用就體現(xiàn)在這里了）。
2.按時寫一篇，根據(jù)進度來，一般整理一個話題也就三個小時，大神隨意，學渣如我等就乖乖寫吧，整體話題才15個左右吧
3.偶爾翻過去的看一看，看看哪里有可以修改或者加強的。
4.多閱讀，就算拿中文寫作，出彩的也必定是那些愛讀書的人。
5,多記段落比記短語有用的多，直接節(jié)約時間，語法，結構都可以學習。
參考的資料
1.劍4-劍9 所有考官的文章，之后再看學生的文章，特別是看評語，明白錯誤
2.慎小凝10天，沒事看啊看，
3.BBC隨身英語
4.國外名人名篇
5我偶爾還看一看英語的原著小說，比較喜歡的是the great gatsby
