Part two地點(diǎn)類話題具體例文分析
1. A dream home you would like to have
Where this place is
What it looks like
When you want to live in there
Why you want to live in such a place
對于這個(gè)題目，首先審題需要審三個(gè)點(diǎn)。一是關(guān)鍵詞。我們在拿到一個(gè)題目之后需要明白關(guān)鍵詞是我們在整片描述中多次使用到的詞匯，如果在整個(gè)的描述中，我們只能多次的使用一個(gè)詞，會被判定詞匯缺乏，缺少英語語言的靈活使用度。所以看到這個(gè)題目我們的第一反應(yīng)應(yīng)該是：我可以用什么樣的詞匯來代替dream和home這兩個(gè)詞。如：dreamy/ surreal/ coveted/ ideal/ optimal/ paradise/ utopia…或abode/ dwelling/ residence/ accommodation/ lodging…其次，我們要考慮的是素材的選擇?？吹竭@個(gè)題目之后，要先確定要講的是哪一類房子，也就是下義詞的選擇。如：bungalow/ cottage/ hut/ villa/ loft/ detached house/ courtyard house…最后，我們要考慮的是時(shí)態(tài)問題。那對于這個(gè)話題，題目當(dāng)中非常清楚的表明是would like to have所以是將來的一種預(yù)期，可以對于一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)進(jìn)行混合使用。
我們在來分析一下這四個(gè)小問題，通過觀察我們可以發(fā)現(xiàn)，其中對于房屋的描述以及對于你為什么想要住在這樣的一個(gè)房子中的原因解釋是相對來講比較重要的問題。涉及到房子描述時(shí)，可能有同學(xué)會覺得自己描述的比較抽象和概括，那這就需要你多補(bǔ)充一些關(guān)于房子的話題詞匯了。比如，我們在描述時(shí)可以通過房子的外部環(huán)境進(jìn)行描述（high-rise community/ well-equipped/ satisfactory virescence…），可以通過內(nèi)部布局來進(jìn)行描述（gym/ yoga room/ spacious balcony…），當(dāng)然也可以通過內(nèi)部裝飾來進(jìn)行描述（French window/ vibrant wall paper/ hanging chair/ home theater…）。 那同時(shí)還比較重要的是最后一個(gè)問題，其實(shí)，我們不難發(fā)現(xiàn)，基本part two所有的最后一個(gè)問題都為感受題，這就證明可能會和我們之前講到的東西有所重復(fù)，遇到此類情況，不需要因?yàn)楹ε露惚芑卮?，這樣反而讓文章顯得沒有結(jié)尾，我們要學(xué)會適當(dāng)?shù)母淖円幌挛覀兊哪承┰~匯或是句法結(jié)構(gòu)來做一個(gè)總結(jié)就好。
At the first glance of this topic, the first dream home that springs to my mind is the underwater home. I know it is a little bit surreal. But the perfect image of under-the-sea abode always lingers in my mind. I pictured that the accommodation could feature three floors. Two of these floors will be situated above the water’s surface, offering sweeping views of the ocean from its sunlit rooms and beautiful decks---complete with lounge chairs, dining area, and even a hot tub. The last tier are the most stunning part which will be submerged. This floor will feature walls made entirely out of glass, offering me and my folks a rare view of the surrounding sea life.
As for the time I want to live in it, like I said before, this futuristic concept may seem far-fetched , but I do believe the architects are making their efforts to make it a reality with neo-technology. I’ll just see.
Regards to the reason why I’m so obsessed with this kind of lodgings, the crucial one is that I fancy the ocean a lot. Each time I saw the endless limpid gleaming water, all botheration will just be drowned into the embrace of it. so I reckon that once I live underwater, I will never have the pain in my neck any more. Plus, the underwater home will be the product of cutting-edge technology, which means that it will be smart and eco-friendly. The power supply system, sewage disposal system and heating system will be matched the home in an environmentally- friendly way. It will not only optimize my life, but also save resources relatively. So that’s pretty much I want to share with you.
2. Describe a place you visited that had a lot of people
When and where you went
Who you went with
What you did there
How you felt about this place
對于這個(gè)話題，是一個(gè)非常典型將地點(diǎn)和旅行結(jié)合到一起的一個(gè)話題，但此題目中有一個(gè)關(guān)鍵詞需要大家注意---had a lot of people，那我們需要意譯一下它的同義詞，如：crowded/ crammed/ busy/ bustling/ gilded…再來分析一下四個(gè)小問題，同時(shí)我們也看到，在四個(gè)問題中并沒有涉及人多的問題，但既然是關(guān)鍵詞，當(dāng)然要在背景介紹城市時(shí)或是在講解我們在旅行途中做的事情的時(shí)候，擁擠的狀況是什么樣子的。其次，在整個(gè)描述中，第三個(gè)問題是最為重要的，旅途中經(jīng)歷的事情，就像之前我提過的一樣，需要從兩個(gè)方面來分析展開描述，注意邏輯。
Speaking of a place I visited that was crammed, the first venue that pops up to my mind is one of the tropical gems---Phuket Thailand, which is located in southern part of Asian continent. It’s a renowned tourist destination, plus, it is commonly referred to as the “Pearl of South”. Specifically, according to the nickname of Phuket., you can picture the gorgeous landscape there. It becomes a must for everyone who loves travelling. I went there with my bestie Lisa last November, cuz the temperature was favorable at that point. When we walked along the seaside, we could enjoy the bracing breeze blowing from the surface of the ocean.
Speaking of what I did there, well, firstly, the views there are breathtaking coz it is a tropical country which could provide us with visual enjoyment, such as the blue gleaming water and boundless stretches of green field. It’s quite picturesque. So we took tons of selfies there. Besides, I heard that the Thai god is efficacious before, and we saw numerous shrines standing on the streets. So we tried the pray stuff. I expect all the wishes could be achieved. What’s more, we definitely sampled the local nightlife, it was extremely novel to me. You know, I had never seen a number of pubs, clubs and theaters in my hometown, and we spent the whole night listening to the pop music and feasting on the beauty of the sleepless island. We had a blast there.
I fancy this spot a lot. The crucial reason is that it was the first time that I had the long trip with my best friend. So it helped me to bring us closer together. And, of course, we commemorated our golden moment via this trip. The other reason is that, it was the great escapism form from the senior period in the university where we were snowed under with tones of schoolwork, like the papers, jobs-hunting stuff. I have to come clean that I absolutely felt relived after the trip.
精品階段的學(xué)生，對于某些基礎(chǔ)的問題的應(yīng)對是沒有什么大問題的，但主要是part two時(shí)間長度的填充，以及要做到言之有物，讓考官對于你的描述瞬間在腦海中出現(xiàn)一幅圖畫的能力有所欠缺。所以我們在講解時(shí)應(yīng)該多注意對學(xué)生怎么有效的使用下義詞來進(jìn)行更為精確的描述要更多的引導(dǎo)，這有這樣才能保證學(xué)生在考試中能夠具體有效的交流，而不是泛泛而談。
雅思口語的提升不是單純的靠著答案的背誦就可以得到一個(gè)理想的分?jǐn)?shù)，相反，有可能會讓自己的表演變得更為拙劣，所以，希望每一位同學(xué)都可以找到自己的講話的風(fēng)格和思路，在考場上能夠發(fā)揮出最好的水平。
