雅思寫作高分備考:地圖題中的“摩登句型”

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近年來,非數(shù)據(jù)類圖表在雅思小作文的考試當(dāng)中,比例逐漸上升。例如2013年度,地圖題(占全年考試10%)和流程圖(占全年考試6%),這兩項(xiàng)合起來,已經(jīng)超過餅圖(13%),直抵線圖(17%),這無外乎難倒了眾多小烤鴨。其中,經(jīng)歷年代變遷的地圖題是較為典型的難點(diǎn)之一。今天,我們以最新《雅思官方指南》中的地圖題為例,為大家介紹一些地理變遷當(dāng)中的優(yōu)秀句型,這其實(shí)并非模板,讀完你會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn),根據(jù)不同的地圖,我們要進(jìn)行不同程度的修改和有針對(duì)性的應(yīng)用,但是萬變不離其宗,“摩登句型”自有妙用。

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請(qǐng)看下面一幅“變遷類”地圖題:

地圖題

寫作中,第一幅圖為靜態(tài)地理位置描寫,并不算難;但當(dāng)描述到第二幅圖的時(shí)候,許多同學(xué)徒有一些表示“擴(kuò)建”“縮減”“被替代”的詞匯,卻不知道到底如何寫出高分句子?,F(xiàn)在就是用句型讓他們發(fā)揮作用的時(shí)刻了,我們一起來精讀一段范文:

In the present-day town, a great deal changed。

分析:主題句,概述這個(gè)小鎮(zhèn)經(jīng)歷了很大的變遷。

Perhaps the most noticeable change are those relating to transportation. Our modern-day needs are very different and so the roads have been improved and traffic lights, a roundabout and a zebra crossing have been added, as well as an extra road. Increased traffic means that a car park has now replaced Goode Farmand the fields that are located at the top of the 1700 map。

分析:此段首先采用被動(dòng)語態(tài),最顯客觀。分別用‘have been done’的結(jié)構(gòu),即現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)搭配被動(dòng)語態(tài),描述道路被修繕了,安全島和斑馬線被增建了,時(shí)態(tài)和句型都有加分。其后,一個(gè)停車場(chǎng)取代了原來的Goode農(nóng)場(chǎng),此處句式進(jìn)行變化,回歸主動(dòng)的敘述,A取代B的句型,毫無重復(fù)。這一段,我們積累的必備句型為被動(dòng)式:A have been v-ed (eg. added/removed etc。) 主動(dòng)式:B have replaced C

Housing is another area where many changes have been made. While in 1700 there were few houses, now there are rows of houses and a block of flats instead of the stables。

分析:總起“房屋是另一個(gè)變化所在”,然后采取時(shí)間前后對(duì)比描述,’While in XX there were..., now there are...’ 一前一后的對(duì)比,十分清晰,這同樣可以作為重點(diǎn)句型的積累,但是特別注意描述過去的情況用過去時(shí),描述現(xiàn)在的情況回到一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

A further development is the supermarket and the hotel, which have been extended。

分析:前面已經(jīng)用過對(duì)比句型,為了避免重復(fù),范文再次為小烤鴨指引航向,一個(gè)非限定性定語從句:’..., which has/have been...’的結(jié)構(gòu),將變化之處再次明確表達(dá)出來,讓人眼前一亮。此句可總結(jié)為’A further development is the..., which have been...’

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